Running Shoeless

Black cherries
Platonic hearts
Remembering moments from the past
Climbing railings
Watching cars pass
Red, white, green and blue
A picture of a world I once knew.
Loss of breath
Running shoeless
Suffocating smoke filling the air
Angered cries
Too many lives
taken in like a fishing net.
We are only people in the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 2:40 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 9, 2016 at 11:47 PM
WOW... :), Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 6:45 PM
..... :) this is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:43 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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April 25, 2012 at 2:10 AM
Very well written. Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will write, read and comments alot of poem here.Write for joy and have a lovely day. - Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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April 24, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Smile ˜ We Are, "The Children Of Light." * When we fail to recognize this truth then, we fail ˜ And You Are far too precious & priceless to ever let this happen ˜ Although I love the thought and image of running free without shoes ˜ My love, always, John!:) ˜
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