Running On Empty

Got me a brand new electrical car 
The range aint no good
I can’t go very far
It never quite reaches the places I need
I reckon I’m wanting
A much longer lead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.
Zzzzz Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.
Zzzzz Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Pardon the hick-hick-hick-up. My computer is on the blink!
Zzzzz Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Ha-ha! Yes, I can see that you would be severely restricted. Amusing little write.
Dailey Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 12:04 PM
I like this
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:56 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
Battie Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Brilliant expressions in your write I would liked to have more of this write to read...m
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