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the race is about to begin it begins with the first ray of light eyes are open and it only takes a second to realize that it's Christmas Day off fly the covers, instantly awake all adrenalin for the year has been saved for this day no "wake up sleepy head" this day and the race is on but one act of kindness is shared before leaving the room the waking of sleeping sibling and it's time to get this army on the march run! run! this is the day! it's here! Santa been here Santa's been here to the tree! to the tree! see what Santa left for me boxes, presents, toys joy joy joy for good little boys

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Date: 3/2/2010 8:57:00 AM
The magic of Christmas to a child. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/31/2009 11:26:00 AM
Awww, this is soooo sweet and nostalgic. I can picture your inner, little boy. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/23/2009 7:59:00 AM
Nice Holiday write here John... A nice early morning read...Thanks....God Bless...Taz
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Date: 12/21/2009 6:21:00 AM
We maybe all father's and parents, friend, and so bonded to the child ... the one we bring and the one in us you now so richly evoke. Good write. Thanks always for your kind thoughtfulness, and may your heart be filled of Christmas cheer.
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Date: 12/18/2009 2:38:00 PM
Cute write here, John. Don't know why (LOL) but I was always searching through the wrapping paper and ribbons for just one more!! ... smile ... Thank you sooooooooo much for your reading of my In The Now ... I really appreciated your interpretation!!
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Date: 12/18/2009 1:13:00 PM
*chuckles* I remember those days and silly man I told you that one poem was NOT at you. At my judgemental family. I told you I felt worse. Alas I am off to work and enjoyed your poem. I left you another soup mail and I shall email when I return from my grueling night.... The Southern Belle
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:49:00 AM
Great energy and joy in this poem, John!! You have become such a dear friend this year and I hope Santa rewards you for all of the kindness you have shown your father with a holiday filled with cheer and blessings. VERY nice work here! Love, carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:18:00 AM
Excitement..passion...great write... Farah
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Date: 12/17/2009 5:52:00 PM
Hoping that this will be true for all the children around the world this year. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:24:00 AM
I can just imagine the presents you are wishing to receive you ornary boy. Very ingenious writing John. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2009 4:45:00 PM
Delightful and fun, John! Brings back memories! Those were special days! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/16/2009 3:24:00 PM
This poem describes homes across the world on Christmas morning! Seen through a child's heart, there is such joy! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/16/2009 1:10:00 PM
Ah, to see and experience through the eyes of children such a joy, especially on Christmas morning!! Truly enjoyed John. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/16/2009 12:00:00 PM
Love the excitement of this write, you captured it well. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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