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Running

He had put his hand over my mouth, And I bit him as hard as I could. I tasted his blood seeping through my teeth. I wanted to get away so bad but the force, his force, was the only thing holding me back. I yelled as loud as I could. I was Just yelling and yelling for help but no one came. He grabbed me by the neck and threw me against the wall. I franticly got up and ran for the door. He stopped me by my hair but in my head I was still running, Running for help.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/14/2009 8:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelsey. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2009 10:47:00 PM
Utilizing a different form is a task. Great job, not much I want to say about the story. I'm sorry though.
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Date: 12/13/2009 9:25:00 PM
Hope this didn't really happen to you, Kelsey. It reads like the beginning of a gripping short story. Perhaps a sequel is in order. You capture the reader's attention from the first line. Well done! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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