Runnin'

her place smells like lavender
or violets
i've slept here many times before
but never well
never fitfully
alien atmosphere i suppose
the bare bulbs in the bathroom
kill my shadow
i'm a stranger in the kitchen
smoking weed on the couch
pissing in the tiolet
and screwing her in the shower
intimately removed
she wants me to move in
i miss her already
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 10:57 AM
I am quickly becoming a fan Brian, great work! and a very fitting title
Loveless Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 5:59 PM
wow brian, wow
Wood Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 4:13 PM
You should have a warning on your poetry and I mean that in the best possible way.
Shango Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 10:42 AM
hooked on it ... I feel the mood. Bravo
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