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Run For Your Lives--Them's Fightin' Words

How long I've ached; how deep the sore!
My albino Soul- suffers blisters...
For with myself, I am at War
Run for your lives- Poetic Sisters!

Dodge the bullets; avoid the mines-
Watch the sky for falling bombs!
Oh, worry not, for all is fine-
It's just a little Napalm :)

Hydrogen, he's just a friend-
But atomic at his center
Radiation, Tunguska station-
Do not fear (it's safe to enter...)

The fray; the fight
Fought day and night
Unending battle- forever addled
(And no end in sight!)

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Jared Pickett February 18, 2014 at 11:00 AM Excellent!! Your style is similar to the styling of my father.. Richard Pickett, I believe he is still on here. Your poem flowed and kept my intrigue. The last verse was spectacular.. Good work my friend.Asavvy1 Just That Archaic Poet February 18, 2014 at 11:26 AM Many thanks, Jared. I will have to look him up. I see a lot of myself in your pieces thus far and also a great deal of talent. Very happy I met you. Thanks for the read and reply :)

Robin Davis October 24, 2013 at 2:00 PM Chan This is a strong piece that is well written and makes the reader see the ideas you have coming from your soul. Great job my friend I'm glad my Old Habits poem you could connect too, hopefully in a good way. Hugs Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 2:31 PM Thank you so much for the flowing review, Robin; I appreciate it so much <3

Karen Anglesey October 13, 2013 at 5:24 PM AH yes, I am totally ready to engage in your little war. Bring it ! Just That Archaic Poet October 14, 2013 at 8:13 AM Gear up, Karen, and join me in the trenches ;) <3

Joseph Matose October 11, 2013 at 1:33 PM Another imaginative poem from Arhaic. That's excellent. I like your style. Check out a poem I'm writing right now, dedicated to you: Rhyme Master.JM Just That Archaic Poet October 11, 2013 at 1:59 PM Thanks as always, Joseph; I will definitely check out your new piece :)