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Run Away With Me

Come run way with me to brink of make believe
Where landscape undulates to rhythm of my dreams
Come run away with me to gypsy’s golden glen
To be immersed in depths of tantalizing streams
Run away with me

Come run away with me; dance to Aurora's tune
Hear melodies that play in rainbow colors bright 
Come run away with me; watch love sick stars that fall
Hold on as we set fire to curtains of the night
Run away with me

Come run away with me; let's lie on sun drenched shore
Gaze through my raven strands at embers in the sky
Come run away with me; taste honeyed sunset kiss
Look to my paradise with wonder in your eye
Run away with me

Come run away with me; take outstretched hand and heart
Your travel guide, I know what places bring delight
Come run away with me; life swiftly passes by
Entrust your heart to me, and see where dreams alight
Run away with me

Jade Celeste  :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Ha ha, love David's comment.
Manassian Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Hi, Richard....Thanks for the visit today. Hugs
Meade Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:11 PM
I love to run and so your words spoke to my heart . . . colors, music, sights all surrounded by a deep friendship . . . such invitations are rare . . . I hope you have room for all of us here! Lovely LO, 7fav
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Hey, David...there is always room for those who are true in their friendship, love, and affection. Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 3:22 PM
you know how to entice, jade... a fabulous, hypnotic write.. huggs
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Thanks for the visit, Nette.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:09 AM
What a delicious invitation, he would be a fool not to accept! Ooh la licious my dear! Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:48 PM
He would be a fool, indeed. Thanks, Richard. Always good to read your encouraging posts. Thank you.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:42 AM
This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Well done! Emile. #7
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Emile. I'm glad you found this to your liking.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Beautiful words that flow from start to finish...love the refrain! Hugs, Rhonda
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Thanks for the visit, Rhonda. I'm glad you liked this piece.
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Beautiful!! The fortunate one would surely not think it twice to follow you wherever your promises lead to. Reminds me slightly of a past poem of mine (Let me take you there). Hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:17 PM
Thanks, Paul. Very sweet of you. That was a lovely poem. Hugs
Bauer Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:41 PM
this is wonderful, eileen! what beautiful language you've used!
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, sweetie. Appreciate the visit...Hugs
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:10 PM
I think this would make a beautiful lyric Eileen - so so beautiful - feel like running away some days - oh to escape the complexities of life! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Manassian Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Yes, Jan. I'm very much in the mood for running away and just....leaving all the troubles behind. Responsibilities tie us down...and life is passing by. Thanks for the visit. hugs
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