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Run Away With Me

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Come run way with me to brink of make believe Where landscape undulates to rhythm of my dreams Come run away with me to gypsy’s golden glen To be immersed in depths of tantalizing streams Run away with me Come run away with me; dance to Aurora's tune Hear melodies that play in rainbow colors bright Come run away with me; watch love sick stars that fall Hold on as we set fire to curtains of the night Run away with me Come run away with me; let's lie on sun drenched shore Gaze through my raven strands at embers in the sky Come run away with me; taste honeyed sunset kiss Look to my paradise with wonder in your eye Run away with me Come run away with me; take outstretched hand and heart Your travel guide, I know what places bring delight Come run away with me; life swiftly passes by Entrust your heart to me, and see where dreams alight Run away with me Jade Celeste :)

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/29/2015 8:23:00 AM

Ha ha, love David's comment.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2015 1:40:00 PM

Hi, Richard....Thanks for the visit today. Hugs

David Meade

Date: 3/26/2015 6:11:00 PM

I love to run and so your words spoke to my heart . . . colors, music, sights all surrounded by a deep friendship . . . such invitations are rare . . . I hope you have room for all of us here! Lovely LO, 7fav

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 6:31:00 PM

Hey, David...there is always room for those who are true in their friendship, love, and affection. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2015 3:22:00 PM

you know how to entice, jade... a fabulous, hypnotic write.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 6:33:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Nette.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2015 8:09:00 AM

What a delicious invitation, he would be a fool not to accept! Ooh la licious my dear! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

He would be a fool, indeed. Thanks, Richard. Always good to read your encouraging posts. Thank you.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/26/2015 7:42:00 AM

This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Well done! Emile. #7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

Thank you, Emile. I'm glad you found this to your liking.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/25/2015 9:04:00 PM

Beautiful words that flow from start to finish...love the refrain! Hugs, Rhonda

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 7:09:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Rhonda. I'm glad you liked this piece.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2015 5:57:00 PM

Beautiful!! The fortunate one would surely not think it twice to follow you wherever your promises lead to. Reminds me slightly of a past poem of mine (Let me take you there). Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 7:17:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Very sweet of you. That was a lovely poem. Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/25/2015 5:41:00 PM

this is wonderful, eileen! what beautiful language you've used!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 7:23:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. Appreciate the visit...Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/25/2015 5:10:00 PM

I think this would make a beautiful lyric Eileen - so so beautiful - feel like running away some days - oh to escape the complexities of life! Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/26/2015 7:39:00 PM

Yes, Jan. I'm very much in the mood for running away and just....leaving all the troubles behind. Responsibilities tie us down...and life is passing by. Thanks for the visit. hugs