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scorching heat piercing my skin sweat from my body leaping off me as if afraid i keep going one step after another can i get through this i start shaking my body's akin i keep going i see the end coming blurred vision taking over friends cheering me on pushing myself pass the limit i keep going a few more feet i hear from the crowd i cross the line i am finished but....i keep going

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 11:42:00 PM
A right nice piece which expresses so well the moments of pushing to the limits and surpassing them pushed on by sheer exhilaration and friends... thanks karen
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