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There once was a maiden with hair like straw, woven to gold but no one ever saw; an imp man made a demand, he had a sneaky plot planned; so the imp helped her and the King said, AWE! She wed him and became a Queen with maids, instead of her head cut off with sharp blades; the imp wanted her first born, that sure did make her forlorn; poor Rumpel- got a doll made of straw, BRAIDS ! ___________________________ January 28, 2019 Poetry/Limerick/Rumpelstilskin- Sort Of Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-931-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Limerick 3 sponsor, Joseph May First Place Featured Poem Week of April 5-12, 2020

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Date: 2/2/2019 5:43:00 PM
Perfect Limerick, Dear Heart, I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/2/2019 10:24:00 AM
A funny “twist” Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 2/2/2019 6:04:00 AM
Great job on this, Constance. Love your poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/2/2019 12:59:00 AM
Wow! Well-expressed story... with a witty twist. Congratulations. God bless you.
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Date: 2/1/2019 4:20:00 PM
A very witty and fun poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:25:00 PM
what a fun poem Constance I love to see your humourous side! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2019 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Dear Heart!
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Date: 1/30/2019 12:29:00 PM
This is such an awesome limerick - Rumplestiltskin what an evil liitle fellow - this was one of my fav. fairy stories as a child - love your poem!
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:22:00 PM
Jennifer, thanks for visiting and for the comment, appreciate ~
Date: 1/29/2019 5:54:00 PM
:) This is really clever and made me smile, Dear Heart. Best wishes in Joseph's contest. I've been working on a Rumplestiltskin too, but it's not ready yet. Love the photo you chose too! That's just how I picture him. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:23:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for the visit and compliment, looking forward to reading your limerick ~
Date: 1/29/2019 3:29:00 PM
ha ha, clever limerick. hope you two are doing well x
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:24:00 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting, yes we are very well, thanks ~
Date: 1/29/2019 3:00:00 PM
Great job retelling the tale in limerick style , Dear heart. is it blizzard weather for you today?
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:24:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the visit and compliment, it is beyond blizzard here and bitter cold too ~
Date: 1/29/2019 2:59:00 AM
Cute story...
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Date: 1/29/2019 6:59:00 AM
Pashang, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 1/28/2019 4:52:00 PM
Hi BW, This is a good entry for the contest them. He was such a sinister character! I hope to see you on the winners list.I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:00:00 AM
Alexis, thanks for the visit and the vote of confidence, appreciate ~

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