Rummaging To Find My Favorite Thing

Given a box of old, lost things I’d loved and enjoyed
which somehow, somewhere in my youth
vanished mysteriously from my life,
I feel thrilled to look inside where first I find
fun troll dolls with colorful long hair.
Also I find my first attempts at poetry – cheesy lovesick poems
which I never knew then foretold the passion of my older self.
Also I come across my beloved pink teddy bear, so worn out,
some niknacks, and a huge pile of brightly colored clothing:
mini-skirts, cute blouses, hot pants, all reminiscent of the 70’s.
I laugh to see the two-piece hot pink outfit I struggled with in sewing class.

Eagerly I rummage through all the clothes until . . .
Oh, my, I spy my old blue denim bell bottoms 
of which I was so fond – the ones with patches
sewn onto the pockets for me by my sister.
Through my mid-teens and then on through my early college years
I had worn that pair of pants so distinctively extra-flared.
Even today I can fit into them. Why oh why did I abandon them?
At last I can touch them and not just have to view them in old photographs.
It was the night I met my dream boy when also I’d been wearing them.
I hold them up to my face and inhale the memory of him against my skin
and that first most wonderful kiss of bliss.

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Date: 1/20/2024 4:29:00 PM
Hey Andrea: Memories…it is fun to reconnect with an earlier version of ourselves and the excitement of all that was ahead and is now lived, You can look back with a wide view of how it shaped you. Fun poem, SuZ
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Date: 1/19/2024 5:59:00 AM
Fond memories as you journey through time, Very nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2024 3:53:00 AM
Reminds me of when I lost my cabinet tea. Had to force the lock finally.
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Date: 1/19/2024 1:58:00 AM
Ahb this is so nostalgic. Seriously i love how you mentioned cheesy love sick poems, i did the same and i cringe so much when i read those. And i love the way you described your childhood things and especially bell bottoms: so cool! You did this prompt very well! If i do this i might sound like im self pitying so might not, as everything i lost is more than what can be bought: Best wishes. Pleasure reading your work always
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Date: 1/18/2024 3:59:00 PM
Hello Andrea, those are fond memories you have of your past. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2024 4:24:00 AM
Hellop Andrea, Enjoy your day my frie3nd. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2024 4:16:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene
Date: 1/18/2024 3:55:00 PM
What a lovely jaunt down memory lane. Is this the blonde fellow? I remember my bell bottom jeans and how they would freeze in the winter time. I miss my platform shoes. The only time I stood 6 ft tall. :0)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2024 4:15:00 PM
Platform shoes. Haha oh the blonde guy probably didn't know I existed. High school boys rarely flirted with me. Maybe because I was honor society type. Most of the guys I dated were several years older than me and I met them clerking at 7/11. That is also where I met the gorgeous Guy Loranger visiting from French Quebec. Tsll dark and handsome, my most preferred type.
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