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Rumi Thoughts

Rumi Thoughts When I say the word You, I mean a hundred universes By: Rumi Dipping inside the ocean of your many silences, I find bits and pieces of the you, you truly are; There are so many reflections in this house of mirrors, but I can only catch a glimpse of the real you, that you provide....

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/24/2023 5:43:00 AM

Glimpse of real you--Perfectly poetic as Rumi--I like the emphasis on you meaning hundred universes!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/24/2023 12:33:00 AM

Gosh, this is such a profound and insightful write, dear Rose!! I absolutely love that quote by Rumi and also, I'm in awe of these precious words that you've crafted "Dipping inside the ocean of your many silences"Woww, this evokes so many thoughts in my heart..And a feeling of nothingness yet everything, that floats in the 'real' version of us, not what we allow to surface in front of others..We can catch only a glimpse! This poem receives a FAV from me, dear poetess..Just impeccably crafted :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/23/2023 5:27:00 PM

well crafted and insightful poem...I agree with Tom...it might be a good fit for the 'who we are at the core' contest...just a thought. have a splendid evening, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/23/2023 7:20:00 PM

I have decided to enter it, glad you enjoyed it :)

Tom Woody

Date: 12/23/2023 4:55:00 PM

Awesome. This would fit in well with the contest theme: who we are at our core. A hundred universes. I like that and you addressed it deftly

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/23/2023 7:19:00 PM

Thank you Tom for taking the time to read and comment, Merry Christmas to you and yours :)