Ruins Rise

bone like trees line streets of Hiroshima
sentinels, scratching the sky,
winter clipped memories ...

life from death arose
springing eternally up
rooting ever down
often bubbling forth from ruins
shadowing the beggar’s bride

who spits on the graves
but mad men dance and war on
bone tree remind us


*kimo, tanka, senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/1/2013 10:17:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:59:00 PM
I like seeing ones that mention this great tragedy of history. WEll done, Debs, Congrats on your win. One of the better ones.
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:19:00 PM
Debbie this blended very well. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/28/2013 9:11:00 AM
My, I would have placed this one much higher! I learn so much from your poetry, Debbie - especially shorter, Japanese style poems. Your kimo gave me goosebumps. Congrats!
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:15:00 AM
congrats. really an excellent write
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:10:00 PM
Excellent written. Congratz on your win, Debz :)
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Date: 6/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
Well said Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:56:00 PM
and a ps......my gratitude that you found my poem to fit your "being" To Be" contest requirements.......wasn't sure if it were to subtle...or too vague.......but it was a hard one to write, in the sense it was based on, or from one of the darkest nights I have experienced, ever. .Accepting what was unacceptable.....can be and is the most difficult task. Thank you for this honor!
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:51:00 PM
Wow......heavy......laden with so much shameful history, but so brilliantly shaped into these three outstanding poems, ...united into one amazing testament. Not sure which I would pick as my favorite.....all the above......!!!
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Date: 6/18/2013 11:38:00 PM
i love your poem and you. i will be following your poems
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Date: 6/18/2013 11:36:00 PM
nice.sense like a moderate shouting at war. afterall poetry is a quest for peace and love.
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful! You are amazing at writing.
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