Ruins Rise

bone like trees line streets of Hiroshima
sentinels, scratching the sky,
winter clipped memories ...

life from death arose
springing eternally up
rooting ever down
often bubbling forth from ruins
shadowing the beggar’s bride

who spits on the graves
but mad men dance and war on
bone tree remind us


*kimo, tanka, senryu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 10:17 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:59 PM
I like seeing ones that mention this great tragedy of history. WEll done, Debs, Congrats on your win. One of the better ones.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Debbie this blended very well. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ober Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 9:11 AM
My, I would have placed this one much higher! I learn so much from your poetry, Debbie - especially shorter, Japanese style poems. Your kimo gave me goosebumps. Congrats!
Sirak Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win
Undertaker Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 6:15 AM
congrats. really an excellent write
Candy Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Excellent written. Congratz on your win, Debz :)
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Well said Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:56 PM
and a ps......my gratitude that you found my poem to fit your "being" To Be" contest requirements.......wasn't sure if it were to subtle...or too vague.......but it was a hard one to write, in the sense it was based on, or from one of the darkest nights I have experienced, ever. .Accepting what was unacceptable.....can be and is the most difficult task. Thank you for this honor!
Richards Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Wow......heavy......laden with so much shameful history, but so brilliantly shaped into these three outstanding poems, ...united into one amazing testament. Not sure which I would pick as my favorite.....all the above......!!!
Undertaker Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 11:38 PM
i love your poem and you. i will be following your poems
Undertaker Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 11:36 PM
nice.sense like a moderate shouting at war. afterall poetry is a quest for peace and love.
Kroeger Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Beautiful! You are amazing at writing.
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