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Ruins

the ancient fortress
surrendered to time and ruins
becomes just another 
wilderness landscape captured
by the photographer's lens.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 5:39 PM
when I see old buildings, sadness washes over me. Your poem describes the emptiness I felt when I visited old castles, etc., in Europe, some that were in ruin.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 12:21 PM
I always enjoy reading your work. Great Picture... The old places are loved my the lens. Have a lovely day writing away........
Achara Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 1:06 PM
Thank you.
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