Rudolph's Stuck In Traffic

Rudolf is stuck in traffic
This is simply tragic
What will he do with the toys
Eagerly awaited by girls and boys

It's that flock of geese causing the commotion
Flying in the v formation
Blocking the skies so no one can pass
Tried pushing his way through.. but alas

They pecked at him was not  nice
Their beaks were as cold as ice 
He  sent a message to Santa Claus
Sam sparrow woke him up from his snores

Relayed that Rudolph was stuck
That the children will be out of luck
Santa then with a flash .... thought
Of asking the starlings for the help he sought

Off they went to go find the poor Reindeer
Whose red nose was looking much paler
Each took some presents off they flew
Delivering to all of the children something new


Christmas morning smiling faces all aglow
Will never know that Rudolph didn't show
That Santa said thank you starlings I am sure
Children will leave you nuts galore

For helping Santa this night
Poor old Rudolph did look a sight
Face was red with cold not just his nose
Santa sent him to bed with socks on his toes

Penned December 1st 2017

Contest:.  Christmas Rhymes by Kim Rodrigues
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/28/2018 1:48:00 PM
Wonderful write. Very creative and innovative. Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 1/20/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thanks for the after holiday chuckle Seren! :-o... this is really cute...poor Rudolph with socks on his hooves! May your poems stay merry all year:)
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:48:00 AM
I still love the way you write. I always hear your voice. I always see your face and your aura blows me away. A Fav.
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Date: 12/3/2017 1:44:00 AM
I loved this, so cute Seren
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:46:00 PM
Delightful. Well done, Seren.
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