Rudolph

I went to my grandmas house and saw Rudolph.
I went outside, because I had to cool off.
She thought his nose was a red flashlight 
that helped her see at night.
She used his antlers to hang her coats,
that smelled like fish, because she fished on boats.
Since he has brown fur, she thought he was a broken dog,
so she feed him fish, that he likes to hog.
All to himself he keeps the fish, 
while I watched him eat,
in a corner by himself.
Than walked in a little elf,
that took him away,
so he can guide Santas slay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 20, 2014 at 9:48 AM
so sweet, love it, Bria, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 20, 2014 at 8:02 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 19, 2014 at 10:40 AM
It sounds like Rudolph had too much X-mas kool aid... Funny!
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