Rude Awakening

Its just so crazy how fast time seems to fly by more each day

Wasn't it just yesterday we were playing hopscotch, freezetag even in the pouring rain?

Waiting for the sun to set, our moms to yell out our names for us to come in

Still young enough for no room available to have happiness paused ln anyway

Times where fights were about claiming a crush & not about discovering infidelity & or betrayal

When there was no such thing as "goodbyes" but only "see you laters"

When moments were loved, felt & lived not captured, edited & posted

Came to discover that when people say "family comes first" its not always about blood related relatives

Because even those show you that they dont always love you but much rather hate you

And it stings so bad to find out cruel **** that was sugar coated making you give respect to those who didn't even deserve it

But time & wisdom do their magic dropping off masks on those who are the first ones to judge you

Within the years you start to feel deeper meanings in familiar feelings

You no longer want to just kiss someone but now be with someone

Or maybe no longer want to be with only someone but with everyone

Regardless, you'll do mistakes that will haunt you & test you, only it's up to you to choose to learn or to let it break you

They'll be times when you'll forget how to laugh & become an expert in shaping different identities

But you'll also discover different talents that you swore were not meant for you

Remember life always keeps going, never ending, never waiting for you

Love too much, laugh too much, cry too much, hurt too much & always, always live too much
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/12/2017 9:58:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one. You have a talent with thoughts and words. Keep writing. By the way welcome to PS.
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Date: 2/12/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much James. I've been feeling very welcomed. Ready to share more poetry.
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