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Ruddy Shade

ruddy shade of red autumnal zephyr of war foe-blades in crisscross 7/8/2021 Inspired by my grandson

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Date: 7/13/2021 11:37:00 PM
I was saying "Whoa! Stand back" when I got to blades in criss cross. Then I saw who inspired it, and I smiled and relaxed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 4:54:00 AM
He was playing a game. The setting was awesome. Boy O boys, as I say, are quite different from girls so you go with the flow.
Date: 7/9/2021 11:18:00 PM
The call for war. Pity we must live with their consequences. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 4:53:00 AM
War is a horrific thing.

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