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Tanned bright sienna leaves float down gently, Yellow and red and brown are aplenty; Everywhere I go I'm drenched in leaf rain, One by one they fall, all over again; Raking up the fallen leaves, I'm dancing, Along with the wind that's slow romancing; Whistling with the breeze blowing through the trees, Vermillion and burgundy weave with ease; Claret auburn shades I see everywhere, Autumn is here with its rubicund fair. 10/09/18

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Date: 10/10/2018 12:41:00 PM
These autumn couplets are a delight to read, Jo! The colourful imagery is indeed captivating! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful write Jo..best wishes
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:11:00 AM
Those ruddy shades of autumn are a joy to behold, and you gracefully accept that they must fall. You even "dance" while raking the leaves! I hate to see the colors fade to brown, but we both enjoy those brilliant colors of fall. Enjoyed very much, Jo! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/9/2018 2:02:00 PM
- A beautiful picture of the fall, Jo :) - Here is usually the autumn wet .... a lot of rain and a lot of wind .... cold and dark .... autumn picture turns brown ... not so pretty :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 1:19:00 PM
ohh, way out of the ballpark, jo... your autumnal pen does entrance!...huggs
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Date: 10/9/2018 9:39:00 AM
A beautifully written, peaceful poem! :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 8:24:00 AM
This was beautiful Jo. Such a colorful scene of Autumn's romance you have created with your wonderful words.
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Date: 10/9/2018 7:14:00 AM
I enjoyed how beautifully your words flow..painting imagery as they dance in rhythm of falling leaves and colors..wonderfully done. A definite win in my books, Jo.
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Date: 10/9/2018 7:04:00 AM
Romantic Autumn at its best! Love this, Pixie! A fave!
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