Rubbish Poem, Do Not Read
Gonna improve my poetry
gonna dispense with stupid rhymes
I'll never again force it together
instead I'll write those random lines
It's suppose to be all modern
avant garde sort of thing
concentrating just on “feelings”
keeping it concise, with well, zing!
But to be perfectly honest
I'm finding it hard to do
You see, for me, rhyming
well... its really my literary glue
But I promise to do my best
be conscious of bad habits
analyse my lines so very closely
and change them where I can
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