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Rubbing Her Back Before Bed

rubbing her back before bed so glad we made it here we pray to make it to the next day the expressive rain makes the night feel soft rubbing her back before bed our bodes begin to relax in our happy place, we breathe easy the expressive rain makes the night feel soft rubbing her back before bed though a fan and an air purifier begin their shift, quiet and silence welcomingly triumph the expressive rain makes the night feel soft rubbing her back before bed knowing that tomorrow we pack our bags the upcoming excitement of the next day lures us to a very content sleep the blessing of felling fully sane inspires us to fully enjoy our time off

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Date: 8/18/2022 3:27:00 PM
The repetition of the lines gives us the stability and kindness that is in this relationship. A nice balance between the progression of the middle lines and enclosing first and last. Elizabeth
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