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Rub Those Winter Eyes

True revelation New birth; green wonder enshrouds The world awakens

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Lena Townsend

Date: 4/28/2009 4:27:00 PM

Michael, wonderful writing as always. I knew it would be great when I saw your name. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/28/2009 11:33:00 AM

Wonderfull spring poem Michael. Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2009 11:01:00 AM

This is a lovely haiku, well deserving to be among the winning poems. Congratulations, Michael!~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/28/2009 9:41:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Michael...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/28/2009 9:01:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/5/2009 7:09:00 PM

Yes it does Michael - You have done an excellent job with this form - God Bless you my friend, MJ

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/5/2009 5:45:00 AM

haiku at its best-- that only you do so well :) Cheers my friend and happy Spring--well, not yet but it's coming...

Brian Strand

Date: 2/4/2009 11:58:00 PM

If only it were true here this morning Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/4/2009 10:18:00 PM

Excellent haiku Michael, this is a true revelation...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2009 6:33:00 PM

There is hope in this lovely haiku! Thanks for brightening the coming days! ~ Love, Carrie

Judy Riley

Date: 2/4/2009 1:45:00 PM

Perfect Haiku, yes we a re ready for Spring! Thanks for sharing, great read. Judy Riley

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/4/2009 12:21:00 PM

Love the last line..went for a long hike today over the green hills here in Ca. Saw a brand new calf.. " new birth"..BG

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/4/2009 12:21:00 PM

Ahhhhh to be enshrouded by greeeeen,mmmm the thought is so yummie. The sun will be there right? Laurie