Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Rounded Edges

Rounded edges soon taking shape
shine once glitter meets the seams
year old troubles washed away
but still fractured in empty dreams

Colours dipped in virgin sand
search out pebbles not yet missed
distant glances roll from the sea
send in surges sealing nature's kiss

Night time dwells with lunar drifts
shoreline pushed back with the breeze
midnight memories soon dispersed
rounded edges overcome life's bursts

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Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2017 at 6:14 PM So beautiful, Tim. You have truly become superb with your imagery!!

Akkina Downing February 2, 2017 at 1:35 PM A lonely night of empty dreams... But I still really like it. I enjoyed it very much. Fabulous piece, Tim :)

Arthur Vaso February 1, 2017 at 9:39 PM The sadness ended with a sliver of hope, I can relate, nice write!

White Wolf February 1, 2017 at 6:50 PM So eloquently done, Tim! I find a balance within your verses! Really enjoyed this one! Tim Smith February 1, 2017 at 7:08 PM Thanks so much Rick.

Heidi Sands February 1, 2017 at 2:38 PM Although there may be hurt I still found this to be peaceful Tim. Nicely written :)

Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2017 at 1:59 PM Night time dwells with lunar drifts..Shoreline pushed back with the breeze-I so love these two exceptional lines..I can feel more than a tinge of sadness here Tim..Its a beautiful deep ooem. Tim Smith February 1, 2017 at 6:50 PM Thank you my friend Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2017 at 2:00 PM I meant poem :)Oops.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2017 at 1:06 PM - Feels a bit sad, but really beautifully written Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith February 1, 2017 at 6:51 PM Thanks A-L

Chris Green February 1, 2017 at 11:56 AM There is something very soft about this poem but also very dark I think. This seems it has come from someplace deep my friend. Very nicely done, this one creates thoughts. Tim Smith February 1, 2017 at 6:49 PM Thanks very much CHRIS

Darren White February 1, 2017 at 11:54 AM Nighttime, sand, see, sinking sun... melancholy, sad, and absolutely beautiful! Tim Smith February 1, 2017 at 6:48 PM Thanks Darren