Round 'N Round

What can I tell                                                                                                
That I thought you knew                                                                                  
But the message                                                                                          
Was never received       
Because what you thought                                                                             
Was based on what I think                                                                            
obviously what you felt                                                                                      
I thought

The start of  a new round                                                                                
Let me get this straight                                                                               
What is the issue here?                                                                                     
I feel as if I were                                                                                           
On one of those carnival rides

Going round and round                                                                                    
Floor dropped open                                                                                         
No answers                                                                                                       
Inside the spinning wheel                                                                                 
You know where the action is                                                                               
Forget messages, stop thinking                                                                          
Either value yourself                                                                                           
Or ride the round 'n round
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 19, 2010 at 7:04 PM
and round 'n round we go lol, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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