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Round and Round

round and round; up and down; my life is mess; with all around; i try to be happy; but feeling sad; i always disappoint; and all is bad; but still a hope; is always there; may be somewhere; but someone care; day in a life; a day will come; while all will not right; but somewhat some; but then a fear; comes around; to which i bear; as a wound; that may be bad luck; will come in life; darkness will occurs; and grab the light. i do not know; dear what to do; sun is yellow; and moon is blue; should i suffer; or try my luck; i dont know the path; where i stuck; last thing that; i want to say; what may be there; i choose my way; whatevers the life; will bring me now; i should accept; and i should allow;.......

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Date: 9/14/2024 4:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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