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Rough To Smooth

From lake’s front cliff stands proud harshly sculpted--- rough Till fine grains tumble down like pearled beadwork-- smooth 3/04/2019 Joseph May's Light Up The Page

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/10/2019 10:23:00 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Nette - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2019 6:37:00 PM

your imagery is wonderful Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 8:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Rough to smooth, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/8/2019 7:01:00 PM

I like this one; it should do well in the contest...good luck.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2019 8:04:00 PM

Absolutely perfect lanterns, Nette! This is superb!! Should place high in the contest! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2019 1:08:00 PM

- Awesome ... smooth, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/6/2019 11:38:00 AM

This is lovely Nette. Time and tide plus the weather slowly wears away the roughness. Works the same way with people. Excellent. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2019 7:02:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to mw. Way to go. Water does bring even the largest rocks or cliffs down over time. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2019 3:16:00 AM

you are a true genius of the Classic poetry, never do you fail, to bring out the wow factor with your work..Harry

James Horn

Date: 3/5/2019 4:26:00 PM

Into the sea of love from above and your thoughts comprised of. Even when I do wait and see, God made each poem for me, And of mine, Special design, Send to you after I set it free