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Rough To Smooth

From
lake’s front
cliff stands proud
harshly sculpted---
rough

Till
fine grains
tumble down
like pearled beadwork--
smooth



3/04/2019
Joseph May's  Light Up The Page

mountainslanterne

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Gregory Richard Barden

March 10, 2019 at 10:23 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Nette - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison

March 10, 2019 at 6:37 PM

your imagery is wonderful Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2019 at 8:27 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Rough to smooth, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

March 8, 2019 at 7:01 PM

I like this one; it should do well in the contest...good luck.

Laura Leiser

March 6, 2019 at 8:04 PM

Absolutely perfect lanterns, Nette! This is superb!! Should place high in the contest! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2019 at 1:08 PM

- Awesome ... smooth, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

March 6, 2019 at 11:38 AM

This is lovely Nette. Time and tide plus the weather slowly wears away the roughness. Works the same way with people. Excellent. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

March 6, 2019 at 7:02 AM

Reads like a good contender to mw. Way to go. Water does bring even the largest rocks or cliffs down over time. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Harry Horsman

March 6, 2019 at 3:16 AM

you are a true genius of the Classic poetry, never do you fail, to bring out the wow factor with your work..Harry

James Horn

March 5, 2019 at 4:26 PM

Into the sea of love from above and your thoughts comprised of. Even when I do wait and see, God made each poem for me, And of mine, Special design, Send to you after I set it free