Rotten Liar

False smiles, your fake facade
you think it fools me
but you are so wrong

Smiling faces are
what we used to see but that
is nothing more than a distant memory

I used to have love for you
but you robbed me of that
it was totally your fault and something
you can never get back!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 5, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Great poem and if we can become friends I can't promise you that i won't ever hurt you but I will try my best not too!!! I love your poetry keep writing!!! YOU DO A GREAT JOB!!! YOUNG LADY!!!
Thekidster Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 7:36 AM
I too Brittany, am unforgiving of the Rotten Liar. Definetly someone not to admire. Great Write. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:10 AM
good write brittany i felt the seriousness of it when i read the last stanza. the first stanza reminded me of my poem insenserity. i am sorrry this relationship did not work out and i hope you stick to your guns with this guy.i really enjoyed reading you today!=)Jo
Hilliker Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 12:13 AM
I like it. Nicely written.
Adelana Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Love that word especially, FALSE...FACADE
Miles Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Passionate. You really write above your years sweets. It feels wrong to enjoy a poem so obviously written from hurt. Matt <3
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Wow, i looove the terminology!
G Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 3:23 PM
great! very heartfelt!
Loveless Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 12:26 PM
wonderful
Loveless Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Awesome!
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 10:54 AM
i agree with carolyn britt, whoever this was you are above them! good write nice passion
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January 10, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Very heartfelt write, Brittany. I hope you find someone who offers you true and lasting love. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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