Rotten Liar

False smiles, your fake facade
you think it fools me
but you are so wrong

Smiling faces are
what we used to see but that
is nothing more than a distant memory

I used to have love for you
but you robbed me of that
it was totally your fault and something
you can never get back!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/5/2010 10:48:00 AM
Great poem and if we can become friends I can't promise you that i won't ever hurt you but I will try my best not too!!! I love your poetry keep writing!!! YOU DO A GREAT JOB!!! YOUNG LADY!!!
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Date: 3/14/2010 7:36:00 AM
I too Brittany, am unforgiving of the Rotten Liar. Definetly someone not to admire. Great Write. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:10:00 AM
good write brittany i felt the seriousness of it when i read the last stanza. the first stanza reminded me of my poem insenserity. i am sorrry this relationship did not work out and i hope you stick to your guns with this guy.i really enjoyed reading you today!=)Jo
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Date: 1/31/2010 12:13:00 AM
I like it. Nicely written.
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:45:00 AM
Love that word especially, FALSE...FACADE
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:03:00 AM
Passionate. You really write above your years sweets. It feels wrong to enjoy a poem so obviously written from hurt. Matt <3
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:37:00 AM
Wow, i looove the terminology!
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:23:00 PM
great! very heartfelt!
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:26:00 PM
wonderful
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:57:00 AM
Awesome!
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:54:00 AM
i agree with carolyn britt, whoever this was you are above them! good write nice passion
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:30:00 PM
Very heartfelt write, Brittany. I hope you find someone who offers you true and lasting love. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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