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ROSY LIPS DREAM GIRL

In which material you made of; rosy lips dream girl,
God himself is confused; it is a daydream or real.

Your pale white skin; glitters like well polished marble, 
Pearls fall nice from your heart whelming chuckle. 

Your twinkle twinkle eyes; look like lightening among cloud, 
Tears got banned there; only sweet dreams are allowed.

Stirring passionate thought; you can steal guy’s attention,  
Deer like your rhyming walk is signature of your fashion.

Framing naughty pretty deal; your eyes talk nice,
You can burn every heart in a single wicked smile.

If your feet will be slipped; you will be losing your goal,
Treasure your beauty locking mind with heart and soul.

Within silky dense hair; your face shines like diamond,
You are made only for a king to illuminate his kingdom.

In which material you made of; rosy lips dream girl,
God himself is confused; it is a daydream or real.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/20/2017 10:32:00 AM
Hello Manmath. My computer mouse landed on this entry so I turned the page. Wow. This is fabulous. I found it original and expressive. Very expressive and your first couplet that you repeated for the ending was perfectly done and so appropriate and fitting for expression. Nice work throughout. Honestly. Thank you for sharing. Well done
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Date: 10/8/2016 11:40:00 AM
Great use of repetition. This poem is a treat! A 7
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:23:00 PM
Ahhh!! Passionate work describing your love??..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work...Sara
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Date: 10/5/2016 2:17:00 PM
oh WOW, a nice romantic tease... Love it * my friend... I think the last line was perfect.... LINDA
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Date: 10/4/2016 2:21:00 PM
May be you should paint your rosy lips dream girl.....
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:34:00 AM
You are made only for a king to illuminate his kingdom....I love the thought of this line Manmath. Lovely! ; )
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Date: 10/1/2016 7:57:00 PM
sweet imagery here, Manmath. What a doll this girl must be!
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:52:00 PM
Fit for a king is this depiction of a guy falling for a girl.
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:48:00 PM
oh so beautiful Manmath lets hope the day dream turns true:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 5:01:00 AM
The incarnation of beauty is so well reproduce within your verses dear friend, Manmath! A seven!
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