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Rosy Day Running

Exhilaration!
Feet pounding windswept pavements
people thrilled to run.
Red butterflies in tandem-
Invigorated heartbeats.

Day to satin night
on every viable route
energetic youth!
Pretty, fleeting scenery
like rosy days going by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 10:40 AM
- Beautifully written, Evelyn :) -
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :)
Poet Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:27 AM
Evelyn Your imagery is so perfectly illustrated. Great set of Tanka.
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Many thanks, my friend. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 10:24 PM
Brilliant imagery. Loved poem and picture.
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much. :)
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