Rosy Day Running

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Exhilaration! Feet pounding windswept pavements people thrilled to run. Red butterflies in tandem- Invigorated heartbeats. Day to satin night on every viable route energetic youth! Pretty, fleeting scenery like rosy days going by.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2022 10:40:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Evelyn :) -

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/14/2022 5:10:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2022 6:27:00 AM

Evelyn Your imagery is so perfectly illustrated. Great set of Tanka.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/14/2022 10:15:00 AM

Many thanks, my friend. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2022 10:24:00 PM

Brilliant imagery. Loved poem and picture.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/14/2022 10:14:00 AM

Thank you very much. :)