Rose-Tinted Days

Ah! For the sweet rose-tinted days

of endless spiraling time

when we bannister slid our way

to curving morning,

climbed through the rails

of adult strictures

out to own 

our

unmapped course.

 

Allowed mere whim and fancy rein

to take us galloping where it would.

Chance ruled our day --

a horseshoe found for fishing luck

from each springing hour,

or daisy chained to minute's

fickle ways,

a swing on branch, a fall, lost shoe,

direction changing clouds

chased out of view.

 

We shooed our way

through strewn meadows;

daytime moths danced on

our wrists.

The way home

was forgotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:36 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 9:03 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Maggie, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:02 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Maggie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2012 at 9:11 PM
Maggie, deep.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
Robillard Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Ah, what a wonderful poem! Great work :)
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