Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Roses of Pink

R oses of pink are for me
O n this stem I do look and see
S weet smells you can breathe
E yes love pink roses for free

 


T he thorns will hurt
H ere I protect my stem skirt
O h red blood will squirt
R un a knife down so you will be unhurt
N ow enjoy without a flirt


Date Written: 7/5/2020
Acrostic Rhyme

4 Place      The Flower, The Thorn Or Both Contest    Judged: 7/11/2020    
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Aditi Mishra July 23, 2020 at 4:33 AM Your words sing of the flower and the thorn so beautifully Paula. Congratulations on your win. Happy to see this one in the list. Blessings and love :) Paula Goldsmith July 23, 2020 at 8:00 AM Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day with blessings..........

John Watt July 12, 2020 at 7:45 PM Very nice acrostic monorhyme Paula, that covered both aspects of the contest theme. Very creative, enjoyed reading it and reading it again! Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2020 at 10:46 AM Thank You, for reading, writing, your kind words and your congratulations. It was an honor to win. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day with blessings..............

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 7:42 PM Roses are nice to behold.. with eyes--that is, Paula, well expressed acrostic deserving to have won -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2020 at 10:44 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and your congratulations. It was an honor to win. Enjoy your day writing away............

JC Brul July 12, 2020 at 1:14 AM Wow, such a sweet acrostic poem..Delightful piece. Congratulations.. Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2020 at 10:53 AM Thanks for reading and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day...............

Tom Cunningham July 11, 2020 at 8:22 PM Beautiful flowers Paula, I've been stabbed many a time. Congrats on your win. Tom Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thanks for reading and for your congratulations. Yes, I have also stabbed myself many times. I had a flower business many years ago. Have a wonderful day...............

Brenda Chiri July 11, 2020 at 6:20 PM Congrats on your fourth place win!;) Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2020 at 10:49 AM Thanks for reading and for your congratulations. Have a wonderful day...............

Mystic Rose Rose July 6, 2020 at 11:29 AM Sweet, Paula Goldsmith July 6, 2020 at 1:42 PM Thanks for reading and for your note. Have a wonderful day................