Roses Of Pink

R oses of pink are for me O n this stem I do look and see S weet smells you can breathe E yes love pink roses for free T he thorns will hurt H ere I protect my stem skirt O h red blood will squirt R un a knife down so you will be unhurt N ow enjoy without a flirt Date Written: 7/5/2020 Acrostic Rhyme 4 Place The Flower, The Thorn Or Both Contest Judged: 7/11/2020 Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/23/2020 4:33:00 AM

Your words sing of the flower and the thorn so beautifully Paula. Congratulations on your win. Happy to see this one in the list. Blessings and love :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2020 8:00:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day with blessings..........

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2020 7:45:00 PM

Very nice acrostic monorhyme Paula, that covered both aspects of the contest theme. Very creative, enjoyed reading it and reading it again! Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2020 10:46:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing, your kind words and your congratulations. It was an honor to win. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day with blessings..............

William Kekaula

Date: 7/12/2020 7:42:00 PM

Roses are nice to behold.. with eyes--that is, Paula, well expressed acrostic deserving to have won -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2020 10:44:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and your congratulations. It was an honor to win. Enjoy your day writing away............

JCB Burl

Date: 7/12/2020 1:14:00 AM

Wow, such a sweet acrostic poem..Delightful piece. Congratulations..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2020 10:53:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day...............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/11/2020 8:22:00 PM

Beautiful flowers Paula, I've been stabbed many a time. Congrats on your win. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2020 10:51:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for your congratulations. Yes, I have also stabbed myself many times. I had a flower business many years ago. Have a wonderful day...............