Roses of Humanity

Burn the bush and eat the fruit.
Take everything you can from this life.
It’s not meant to last
And you came first
Rules of the desert 
Leave the dead and wounded behind.
Bushman, atavistic warrior
Live by the spear and die by the machete
An  AK47 by your side.
Sixteen years old
Never felt true love
Lying there in death
Bleeding from your mouth
The roses of humanity
Have left their thorns in your throat
You never cried
You never laughed
You barely lived 
And then you died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/25/2014 11:54:00 PM
This has so much depth... my favorite lines:"Sixteen years old Never felt true love Lying there in death" That really got to me!!! Awesome write! I'm impressed. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/25/2014 8:58:00 PM
Your too kind. I am at your mercy. ~Kilmer
Date: 8/15/2014 8:44:00 PM
Fantastic title and so poignant all the way through
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/16/2014 9:34:00 AM
Karen your the best. Thanks for the thoughtful comment. I miss you on the Soup. Kilmer
Date: 7/24/2014 9:57:00 PM
Fantastic write, on a sad but ever so real topic.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/25/2014 2:34:00 AM
Arthur, thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. ~Kilmer
Date: 7/24/2014 8:48:00 PM
Live in the moment, and yes, remember to take all those moments and live them. I like this! Truly enjoyed your poem.
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Gry Christensen
Date: 7/25/2014 2:42:00 AM
Believe me, I know............
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/25/2014 2:36:00 AM
Gry, live in the moment and remember memories are all we have. Death knocks everyday and we don't even know it. We are the luck ones. ~Kilmer
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