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Remember the way we jumped up and dOwn oh our Smiles, hEarts beating like flapping wingS shouting gloriously for all our efforts to be repaid everyone to their feet, except the defeated simultaneous combustion of crowds arena in disArray, embarrassment in full display Rendered eye for eye, tooth for tooth easy eyes fluttEr to the basement floor remember the day, the Bird was snatched away extraordinary Lala land, we played the game desperate, we came unglUed. lost my left shoE Kim Rodrigues ©2017 Oscar madness.

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Date: 2/27/2017 9:26:00 PM
A masterful piece Kim! 7 ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 2/27/2017 3:58:00 PM
Really like this well written acrostic Kim, Well thought out clever poem, Roy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thanks, Roy!
Date: 2/27/2017 2:10:00 PM
A timely display Kim, well done...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 2/27/2017 11:45:00 AM
Hello Kim, A very interesting acrostic here indeed. I really like the artful way you configured this particular poem and the way you rendered the verses. Superb Job!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gary! :):)
Date: 2/27/2017 10:11:00 AM
Very creative Kim. I like how you did this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)

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