Roses and Narcissus and the Sky and the Ocean

the sky's lips are the softest when the red rose's and narcissus' petals bloom
but when the heart beats it only steps closer to finishing
so why is the rose red when its passion only leaves it to wilt?
the same reason the yellow narcissus looks down
suppose it knows what the future holds
 
the rose simply tries to ignore that to come
but having passion for now is not its destiny
in the end, the rose will turn dark and unkind
while the narcissus will be too burdened
he will not threaten life with his thorns
 
the sky and the ocean mock their colors
they are the ones who are eternal
not the red rose or the anxious, yellow narcissus
and though their wealth of life is not as great
the rose looks to the sky, and narcissus to the ocean
 
the sky watches the rose’s passion wilt to misery
and the narcissus droop lower and miss his reflection
the sky kisses with radiant lips upon their petals
but fails to save them from their fate
then he returns his face upon the ocean
 
only the sky wishes his color upon the flowers
the ocean’s eyes are oblivious to their colors
she has no idea that her shores are built by their petals
so when the sky mourns upon the ocean, she screams
unable to understand the horror the sky has seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 6, 2016 at 10:23 PM
AARON CROWLEY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 26, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Aaron c, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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August 31, 2011 at 12:56 AM
I really like imagery in this piece. Thanks for reading mine, and to answer your question, yes, I'm an insomniac, but I don't want to be. I also have migraines frequently. Do you have any cures?
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August 23, 2011 at 11:51 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight..enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
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August 23, 2011 at 7:16 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Aaron. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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