Russell Sivey Poet Pantoum

Rose Whisperer

The rose is enlightened by the dawn’s light
Gorgeous in kind, every scent is still there
Gardener spends hours working on their might
Direct line to the floral realm she cares

Gorgeous in kind, every scent is still there
An approach used from many years ago
Direct line to the floral realm she cares
A kind of psychic beyond the real flow

An approach used from many years ago
She has a perfect talent, yard worker
A kind of psychic beyond the real flow
A rose whisperer is her thunder

She has a perfect talent, yard worker
The whisper of her heart is fabulous
A rose whisperer is her thunder
She lives for the part that’s harmonious

The whisper of the heart is fabulous
Gardener spends hours working on their might
She lives for the part that’s harmonious
The rose is enlightened by the dawn’s light

Russell Sivey

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Harry Horsman August 5, 2013 at 9:09 AM this is a wondrous poem Russel, so unique, and love the classic style.

Donna Jones August 4, 2013 at 8:14 PM Stunning.stunning....master Russell.....

Jack Ellison August 4, 2013 at 5:13 PM A bunch of lovely reviews, Russell! May I add mine! Cheers to you my good friend!

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2013 at 1:36 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..The one who works in the rose garden has to be made of touch stuff amist all those thorns..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..I did the breakfast chore again today but I don't do that during the week most of the time..Sara

Nette Onclaud August 4, 2013 at 11:45 AM wow! your words smoothly touch my heart and made me shiver, russell... some people have keen sense of instict and you so depict this so well... grreat stuff!..:) hugggs

Shadow Hamilton August 4, 2013 at 6:06 AM this is super Russell I love it Shadow x smiles

Len Gasun August 4, 2013 at 3:56 AM Stunning write as always my dear friend Russell. You're really expert in such special form of poem like this. How I wish I can write one when I've more free time. Thank you so much for sharing. I really love your poem & so enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson August 4, 2013 at 2:11 AM Just wonderful Russel and what a clever and unique idea using the phrase 'rose whisperer!'... Have a wonderful Sunday my friend - Tim