Rose Sunset On Flint

Rose sunset on the Flint
Rose glowing through dark trees
What a beautiful sight
To set my mind at ease

The sunset in the west
Cast rose on the water
This winter sunset best
Since dining with lover

Looking to the east now
At the close of the day
There rose a golden moon
To guide us rest of way

To just sit and absorb
The glow of rose on Flint
But glow is only reminisce
Of God's accomplishment

On the left was sunset
To the right the moon rose
At same time too beauties
Awe inspired by God suppose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/16/2011 11:13:00 AM
Lovely write, Sara. The most important rule of poetry, be it rhyme or prose, is rhythm. Most poems I read have many superfluous words. However, this read, I feel, would benefit with a bit more padding in order to achieve a better flow. Rose sunset on the Flint / Rose glowing through dark trees / Nature's own wondorous tint / To set a worried mind at ease. I hope you are not offended by this, it is not my intention, merely a suggestion. Thank you very much for sharing. eph.
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:25:00 PM
Lovely one Sara! Enjoyed the read:) Thanks for reading "Peach Chant"... love a good juicy peach, especially that first one of the season! Always happy to stop by and read your poems;)
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:33:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work....I have to go to the beauty shop and get groomed. talk to yo later.
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Sara !Enjoyed---kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:16:00 AM
this is the sun i see comming up. T. S.
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:39:00 AM
Hope all is well with u this wonderful weekend Sara.. hi to Doris too..luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:37:00 PM
This is quite a beauty Sara, lovely lines to wake up to this morning.. ;-) Wilma
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:06:00 PM
You make it sound so beautiful, so visual is your poem, wonderful~~
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:48:00 PM
It's as if you were looking right at some beautiful painting or a wonderful scene in nature. Nicely done, Sara.
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:56:00 PM
Splendid write for the rose Sara ... excellent expressions of description both vivid and vibrant lines... good luck if for any of the contests posted my friend.. happy weekend too..luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 3:18:00 PM
You always put together just perfectly... Love the words, meanings and the whole package you have penned... luv Michael
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:25:00 AM
If this occurred yesterday, Sara, you were seeing a beautiful full moon rising. I can easily picture through your words the pinkish glow on the flint as the sun fell. We have to feel grateful for all of the beauty God has bestowed for us to enjoy during our earthly life. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:23:00 AM
Sara Kendrick is a whole heated explainer. i love your images and symbolism. This art work is also didactic.
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:03:00 AM
two roses of the day glisten with your dainty, glorious phrases, sara.. soothing! with prayers and huggs,:) nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:14:00 AM
Dear Sara, your words capture the two best times of the day. Lovely. Gisele
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