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Rose Sunset On Flint

Rose sunset on the Flint Rose glowing through dark trees What a beautiful sight To set my mind at ease The sunset in the west Cast rose on the water This winter sunset best Since dining with lover Looking to the east now At the close of the day There rose a golden moon To guide us rest of way To just sit and absorb The glow of rose on Flint But glow is only reminisce Of God's accomplishment On the left was sunset To the right the moon rose At same time too beauties Awe inspired by God suppose

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Ephraim Crud

Date: 3/16/2011 11:13:00 AM

Lovely write, Sara. The most important rule of poetry, be it rhyme or prose, is rhythm. Most poems I read have many superfluous words. However, this read, I feel, would benefit with a bit more padding in order to achieve a better flow. Rose sunset on the Flint / Rose glowing through dark trees / Nature's own wondorous tint / To set a worried mind at ease. I hope you are not offended by this, it is not my intention, merely a suggestion. Thank you very much for sharing. eph.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/28/2011 6:25:00 PM

Lovely one Sara! Enjoyed the read:) Thanks for reading "Peach Chant"... love a good juicy peach, especially that first one of the season! Always happy to stop by and read your poems;)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/24/2011 6:33:00 AM

enjoyed reading your work....I have to go to the beauty shop and get groomed. talk to yo later.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/19/2011 11:44:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here Sara !Enjoyed---kashinath

The Situation

Date: 2/19/2011 9:16:00 AM

this is the sun i see comming up. T. S.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2011 5:39:00 AM

Hope all is well with u this wonderful weekend Sara.. hi to Doris too..luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/18/2011 9:37:00 PM

This is quite a beauty Sara, lovely lines to wake up to this morning.. ;-) Wilma

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 9:06:00 PM

You make it sound so beautiful, so visual is your poem, wonderful~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2011 6:48:00 PM

It's as if you were looking right at some beautiful painting or a wonderful scene in nature. Nicely done, Sara.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2011 4:56:00 PM

Splendid write for the rose Sara ... excellent expressions of description both vivid and vibrant lines... good luck if for any of the contests posted my friend.. happy weekend too..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/18/2011 3:18:00 PM

You always put together just perfectly... Love the words, meanings and the whole package you have penned... luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2011 8:25:00 AM

If this occurred yesterday, Sara, you were seeing a beautiful full moon rising. I can easily picture through your words the pinkish glow on the flint as the sun fell. We have to feel grateful for all of the beauty God has bestowed for us to enjoy during our earthly life. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/18/2011 8:23:00 AM

Sara Kendrick is a whole heated explainer. i love your images and symbolism. This art work is also didactic.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/18/2011 8:03:00 AM

two roses of the day glisten with your dainty, glorious phrases, sara.. soothing! with prayers and huggs,:) nette

Gisele Vincent-Page

Date: 2/18/2011 7:14:00 AM

Dear Sara, your words capture the two best times of the day. Lovely. Gisele