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Rose Queen

Ooh la la, the rose, coronate her beauty. Her ruffled scent, her hues, dare not refuse. When petals red, like strawberry-fruity, and lovey-dovey white, one must persue. Persistent veil of mist will kiss one’s soul, will kill one’s love for any forthright bud. She’s no petulant child, a fine trompe l’oiel. Commands perfume’d ascent of pulse, life’s blood. Beneath the fray, a thorn’d adversary will snag the jugular of swivel-head. Her red pursed lips, dove-skin, a bit scary. Don’t be tempted to find another’s bed. She stands ten feet tall-er than uncut weeds. She possesses a prowess set that leads. 3/14/2021
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Date: 3/22/2021 12:49:00 PM
I love that you began with "ooh la la" it gives her such a marvelous introduction and it never stops giving!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2021 2:57:00 PM
lol...thank you, dear one!
Date: 3/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
Oh my! Such lovely expressiveness of color, fragrance and beauty's delight, form this tribute to the incomparable rose. It's a fave for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2021 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, sweet one!
Date: 3/20/2021 2:19:00 PM
Nothing like a beautiful ??rose glass upon, Kim this has great imagery throughout with insightful thought too. Blessings,Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2021 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!
Date: 3/19/2021 12:28:00 PM
The rose is a queen and there are so many varieties. Lovely sonnet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2021 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 3/19/2021 9:51:00 AM
There is nothing more beautiful and fragrant than the rose. Hope you have a lovely weekend Kim Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2021 5:12:00 PM
Happy weekend! Thank you!
Date: 3/19/2021 7:36:00 AM
- Ooh la la, the rose poem is beautiful, Queen Kim ... I enjoy its scent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2021 5:12:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
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