Rose Petals

Glowing and white, pure liquid flowing
My heart is expanding.
And I hear angels singing a song that fills my soul.
Rose petals are falling.

A slow steady walk, a gentle loping grace.
My smiling man in all black
So gorgeous. So perfect.
So mine.
My face is shining.
The angels are singing.
Rose petals are falling.

A steady warmth
So strong, and so deep
That gentle heat fills me to my core
And I find myself falling

Falling…Falling….falling.


Rose petals are falling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 4, 2011 at 10:48 PM
what a lovely and deep poem ,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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November 11, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Daniexelle. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 21, 2010 at 7:59 AM
DANIEXELLE, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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October 19, 2010 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 9:25 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Daniexelle. Love, Carol
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