Rose Petals

The broken shell began to crack 
opening up into a whole new world 
moving around shuffles where pieces became connected

Fused by energy radiating out from sunshine 
whispering warmly sweet radiance bringing life to darkness 
dove of a thousand memories floating within wings

Captured once upon a time oceans mist 
where the rainbow's arch held love beautiful 
embraced through the heart scented gift
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bateman Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Very descriptive and very well-done!! Your three stanzas form enchanted and truly magical images of radiance and wondrous beauty. Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Beautifully done..excellent lines of romance.
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 12:19 PM
- There are few things that are a better symbol of romance than roses, Liam :) - A beautiful cheerful write :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 12:29 PM
a red rose i pray blooms on christmas for the love of god i will put at his mothers feet last year it first bloomed a white rose the one of peace which i saw as a sign of a miracle as i promised them to her if they bloomed this year its a red rose which has taken me by surprise smiling bless you always pal
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