Get Your Premium Membership

Rose Oracle

I picked up a Rose an emblem of love
Hopeful heart and a rolling tear
He loves me and he loves me not 
One petal at a time with a soft whisper

Each petal of rose a scintilla of hope 
With each pluck rising and sinking
Last petal of Rose said loves me not
Eyes made way for bursting tears

Letting go is not an easy mission 
Hope searched and found another Rose
He loves me not and he loves me true
Whispering again I found my self


April 19, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 2/20/2016 11:43:00 AM
fatima, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 12/20/2015 2:52:00 PM
FATIMA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Login to Reply
Date: 4/19/2015 9:43:00 PM
I am glad that hope at least searched and found another rose. I hate when these things end with no more roses. Excellently written, and thank you for sharing this.
Login to Reply
Bhopali Avatar
Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comments. :)
Date: 4/19/2015 1:11:00 PM
beautiful but sad Fatima - in 27 years my hubby has never given me roses so i cant pull the petals out to see if he loves me! Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Login to Reply
Bhopali Avatar
Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thank for the appreciation Jan. I think your hubby surely loves you and hence does not need to give roses....
Bhopali Avatar
Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank for the appreciation Jan. I think your hubby surely loves you and hence does not need to give roses....
Date: 4/19/2015 1:05:00 PM
- "a Rose an emblem of love" - A beautiful poem, Fatima ! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Bhopali Avatar
Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thank you for reading and appreciating...
Date: 4/19/2015 1:05:00 PM
here comes a 7 !!!!! sorry :)
Login to Reply