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Rose Oracle

I picked up a Rose an emblem of love
Hopeful heart and a rolling tear
He loves me and he loves me not 
One petal at a time with a soft whisper

Each petal of rose a scintilla of hope 
With each pluck rising and sinking
Last petal of Rose said loves me not
Eyes made way for bursting tears

Letting go is not an easy mission 
Hope searched and found another Rose
He loves me not and he loves me true
Whispering again I found my self


April 19, 2015

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/27/2024 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 11:43:00 AM

fatima, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 2:52:00 PM

FATIMA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

The Grahamburglar

Date: 4/19/2015 9:43:00 PM

I am glad that hope at least searched and found another rose. I hate when these things end with no more roses. Excellently written, and thank you for sharing this.

Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 PM