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Rose Oracle

I picked up a Rose an emblem of love Hopeful heart and a rolling tear He loves me and he loves me not One petal at a time with a soft whisper Each petal of rose a scintilla of hope With each pluck rising and sinking Last petal of Rose said loves me not Eyes made way for bursting tears Letting go is not an easy mission Hope searched and found another Rose He loves me not and he loves me true Whispering again I found my self April 19, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 11:43:00 AM

fatima, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 2:52:00 PM

FATIMA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

The Grahamburglar

Date: 4/19/2015 9:43:00 PM

I am glad that hope at least searched and found another rose. I hate when these things end with no more roses. Excellently written, and thank you for sharing this.

Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:31:00 PM

Thank you for your encouraging comments. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

beautiful but sad Fatima - in 27 years my hubby has never given me roses so i cant pull the petals out to see if he loves me! Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:38:00 PM

Thank for the appreciation Jan. I think your hubby surely loves you and hence does not need to give roses....

Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thank for the appreciation Jan. I think your hubby surely loves you and hence does not need to give roses....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2015 1:05:00 PM

- "a Rose an emblem of love" - A beautiful poem, Fatima ! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Bhopali
Date: 4/20/2015 12:40:00 PM

Thank you for reading and appreciating...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2015 1:05:00 PM

here comes a 7 !!!!! sorry :)