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Rose Moon For Lovers

ROSE MOON FOR LOVERS

Vibrancy
  of vesper-velvet gown
Buddleia glass slippers fall to ground

Fairy lights,
  the climaxing of stars,
in blue-eyed diamond-facet orbs

Riveting
  rose moon, kiss of jasmine
in cimmerian shade of Eden

Silhouette
  flirt, her bodacious trunk,
vines wrapped around her beckoning arch

3/8/2021
Images in Parallel Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
PS Syllable counter verified 3/6/9 syllable count
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Schiavina Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations Kim on your very beautiful winning poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write and pictures. Love it. Have a blessed day/week.............
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Thank you, Paula!
May Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:28 AM
- A lot of beauty in one poem, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Beautiful parallel images, Kim--I enjoyed the read.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 11:06 PM
Loved your imagery. Very romantic.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Buehler Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 8:15 PM
This is enchanting, Kim! Best wishes for the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Faulkner Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 7:52 PM
How sensual, evokes the secret midnight embrace of lovers!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Michelle!
Cunningham Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Beautiful imagery Kim, hope your week is going well Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 4:42 PM
I’m doing well! Thanks! I am going to read your poem shortly!
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