Rose Hips

The banks of the stream are filled with rose hips,
a blossom with tiny delicate tips.
Shrubby, probably a rose of Sharon,
white blossoms fill the bushy bank thereon.

After cutting the lawn, I trim the brush,
culling weeds and vines away from the bush.
Yielding fragrant flowers and testy bees.
In the evening deer nose around the trees.

The treasured petals form a thoroughfare
grown on prickly stems designed to ensnare.
Each budding blossom, like a cherubim,
with pollen nectar for a diadem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 26, 2009 at 11:27 AM
Another delightful read Bill>>James
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July 24, 2009 at 6:59 AM
Such a "feel good" poem.....a day brightener with all those lovely images! ~ Carrie
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July 24, 2009 at 6:28 AM
wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke
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