Rose Garden

Sitting in a rose garden with the one I love,
A warm summers evening,
Sipping nice cool wine, so devine
Hands touching hands, the scent from the flowers,
Heaven on earth, singing birds, tweet, tweet, tweet.
The setting of the sun is like fire in the trees
As their branches shimmer in the breeze.
The trickle of the fountain, calming of our spirit,
Sitting in a rose garden with my wife.








 This is my entry in the five senses, five elements competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Beautiful!
Tugaff Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 11:23 PM
Wooooow! What a wonderful picture to paint. Very romantic couple. I like this Mr. Wilson. ernilando
Parish Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 6:46 PM
Such a lovely sweet write Leon. I can almost picture this garden in my mind...wonderful!
Richards Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 5:48 PM
I love the sweetness of this poem, it has beauty and love wrapped up in the nature of the senses . Lovely write! ~ Carrie
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