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Rose Flower Life Poem

Rose
Poem

Roses are sweet, but not petit,

They never dry out, as they fly in,

Precious for the house of those, who are good,

Pleasing for the house of those, who are special,

They never thought of encountering a lost rose,

Who was tossed away,

For being dried-up all of a sudden,

As they notice its specialty,

And that it’s not impoverished

Down they went to help the seed of the same specialty,

Rose, they met,

Precious to those who are good, with the identical rose,

Pleasing to those who are special, with the identical rose,

Then they go underneath the ground

They will meet,

The seed of same rose,

All with the help of the, identical rose

For just another beginning of a continuing course.

Source: https://poemtheart.com/rose/

( SARAH SHAHZAD  JULY, 2019)

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Jessica Thompson May 19, 2020 at 3:59 PM Nice poetic imagery ..The rose like life always goes on. Have a great day. Jess :)

Howard Kerr February 11, 2020 at 1:32 AM I love this evocative poem, its construction and execution. Thanks for your comment on my work. Howard poemtheart poemtheart March 9, 2020 at 6:57 AM I am glad you enjoyed it

Leroy Baker February 4, 2020 at 10:01 AM A probing and continuous examination of lasting themes---to combine the plume and scent and glory of the rose with the fructified solvency of a house is a reward in and of itself. Reading the poem is itself it's own reward. A veritable victory against the desperation of impoverishment. poemtheart poemtheart March 9, 2020 at 6:58 AM Thank you so much for your kind words ... Bless and love

Victoria Hunter January 25, 2020 at 8:12 AM Wonderful poem, like the symbolism. ??I do have some suggestions for taking another approach that will definitely take the poem to a whole new level. Let me know if you are interested in hearing my suggestion. I enjoyed the poem ?? I think you would like my YouTube channel at Poet Victoria Hunter. ?? poemtheart poemtheart January 27, 2020 at 12:23 AM I am glad you enjoyed it.. thank you so much.. & i will definitely take a look at your youtube channel.. send me link plz.

Ireland Dowd January 24, 2020 at 8:45 AM Oh my gosh, this is really good. It tells a very vibrant story that the reader can visualize. poemtheart poemtheart January 27, 2020 at 12:24 AM thank you..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 15, 2020 at 9:14 AM Wow a great poem how it unfolds the rose in poetic muse with impressive eloquence and words. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. poemtheart poemtheart January 17, 2020 at 4:53 AM thank for comment, & i will do..

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 6:18 AM Ah, I do love roses; this blossomed beautifully.

Harry Horsman January 11, 2020 at 11:44 PM Beautiful poetry, love the Rose... poemtheart poemtheart January 13, 2020 at 12:19 AM thank you so much

Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2020 at 3:56 PM Well expressed. ;0) poemtheart poemtheart January 10, 2020 at 4:29 AM thanks

Eve Roper January 6, 2020 at 12:48 AM nicely expressed , well described of a grafting roses. hugs. poemtheart poemtheart January 7, 2020 at 11:38 PM appreciate.. thank you

Chris Hagy January 5, 2020 at 10:08 PM Beautiful and expressive... a "rose" of a poem :) poemtheart poemtheart January 7, 2020 at 11:37 PM thank you :)

Jan Terry January 4, 2020 at 6:54 PM Hello Sarah. I visited your poetry website at poemtheart. You are very talented and your perspective on life and nature is wonderful. I enjoy the varied subjects of your poems. Writing about whatever enters into your path whether by reading about it or experiencing it, gives your poetry a freshness. Please continue to compose so all may see life through your eyes. Hugs. Jan poemtheart poemtheart January 17, 2020 at 4:52 AM Thank you so much Jan for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated :)