ROSE BUSHING LIFE: A Haiku Alison Sowed & I Reaped

ROSE BUSHING LIFE   
(A Haiku Alison Sowed & I Reaped)

Let’s be as roses,
Life lived with petals and thorns;
Surviving its vase:-

analogyappreciationdedicationsoulmatevisionaryhaiku

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Alison A Smith

August 23, 2026 at 9:31 PM

What a tender little haiku — the rose as a stand-in for a shared life feels warm and well-earned, especially with that closing image of "surviving its vase." It suggests endurance and fragility held together in the same breath, which suits the dedication to a soulmate beautifully. The collaborative framing ("sowed & reaped") adds a nice layer of partnership to the piece itself, mirroring the theme.

Millard Lowe

September 1, 2026 at 6:22 PM

ONE> Thanks, Alison. Peace and Love.

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