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''Rose''

To smell as sweet as her name. Embodied beauty. Reach embraced course of magnetic sparks. Gentle,delicate,rare touch of soft lips. Rays of light strike eyes of glass. Pierce my soul. A warmed red shock into an everlasting love. Breath of the rose,lye still in her palm. Side and side,the fields' of green surround us.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/13/2011 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Poet Destroyer's "Best Blossom Design" contest Kacey. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2011 1:03:00 PM

Kacey~~ A SUPER ~Congratulations 4 this wonderful FLOWER entry!!!! Thank you it was an honor to have you support my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/11/2011 12:58:00 PM

This was such a beauty of words Kacey.So congrats on your 1st.place win.~Teresa

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/11/2011 12:22:00 PM

Congrats Kacey! I believe a rose says it all. I am blessed that my spouse is regularly buying me flowers. You are so correct in your third line with the course of magnetic sparks. I especially enjoyed your line of a warmed red shock into an everlasting love. They make women do all kinds of crazy things--despite if they are red or yellow OR white. Appreciate reading this winner of yours this day. Again, great job. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/11/2011 8:06:00 AM

Roses really are symbols of "everlasting love," Kacey. Congratulations on your first-place win in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2011 7:36:00 AM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of p.d., Kacey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2011 10:23:00 PM

this is very pretty, Kacey. It sounds like Victorian poetry!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/10/2011 9:46:00 PM

Very creative write and perspective of "the Rose"! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/10/2011 9:35:00 PM

Copngratulations Kacey. Great job. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/10/2011 8:45:00 PM

Congrats Kacey on your first place win in PD's contest with this lovely rose poem..my friend.. super one..luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/22/2011 9:55:00 AM

Kacey you have this poem entered in a contest that is strictly for dodoitsu, this lovely piece does not qualify but I would appreciate it if you removed it and attempted a dodoitsu for the contest, the form is simple and you might enjoy trying something new

Adam Hollingsworth

Date: 5/21/2011 1:53:00 PM

this is an amazing poem; i love it! the images in this are divine.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 8:42:00 AM

Such lovely poetry on my birthday to read Kacey.. beautiful expressions of the rose.. my Mom's favorite flower in yellow... hope u are enjoying a happy weekend ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 10:30:00 PM

Oh, Kacey, this is such a lovely description of the roses. They do seem to embody beauty with a rare and delicate appeal. Best wishes in the contest and thanks for your kind comments. Hope you'll consider writing for my contest as well. Love, Carolyn