''Rose''

To smell as sweet as her name.
Embodied beauty.
Reach embraced course of magnetic sparks.
Gentle,delicate,rare touch of soft lips.
Rays of light strike eyes of glass.
Pierce my soul.
A warmed red shock into an everlasting love.
Breath of the rose,lye still in her palm.
Side and side,the fields' of green surround us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Poet Destroyer's "Best Blossom Design" contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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June 12, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Kacey~~ A SUPER ~Congratulations 4 this wonderful FLOWER entry!!!! Thank you it was an honor to have you support my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:58 PM
This was such a beauty of words Kacey.So congrats on your 1st.place win.~Teresa
Song Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Congrats Kacey! I believe a rose says it all. I am blessed that my spouse is regularly buying me flowers. You are so correct in your third line with the course of magnetic sparks. I especially enjoyed your line of a warmed red shock into an everlasting love. They make women do all kinds of crazy things--despite if they are red or yellow OR white. Appreciate reading this winner of yours this day. Again, great job. Gwendolen
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June 11, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Roses really are symbols of "everlasting love," Kacey. Congratulations on your first-place win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:36 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of p.d., Kacey
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 10:23 PM
this is very pretty, Kacey. It sounds like Victorian poetry!!
Delacroix Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Very creative write and perspective of "the Rose"! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
Johnson Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 9:35 PM
Copngratulations Kacey. Great job. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Congrats Kacey on your first place win in PD's contest with this lovely rose poem..my friend.. super one..luv..
Roberts Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Kacey you have this poem entered in a contest that is strictly for dodoitsu, this lovely piece does not qualify but I would appreciate it if you removed it and attempted a dodoitsu for the contest, the form is simple and you might enjoy trying something new
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May 21, 2011 at 1:53 PM
this is an amazing poem; i love it! the images in this are divine.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Such lovely poetry on my birthday to read Kacey.. beautiful expressions of the rose.. my Mom's favorite flower in yellow... hope u are enjoying a happy weekend ...
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May 20, 2011 at 10:30 PM
Oh, Kacey, this is such a lovely description of the roses. They do seem to embody beauty with a rare and delicate appeal. Best wishes in the contest and thanks for your kind comments. Hope you'll consider writing for my contest as well. Love, Carolyn
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