Rose

The prettiest flower in the garden A magnificent shade of pink The envy of all the female roses From the males always a smile and a wink Her petals were perfection, full and soft as silk She was without doubt the most beautiful Rose Until a mighty storm hit one night Blowing her petals away…..leaving her stark naked and exposed!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2024 2:40:00 AM

- A beautiful rose as long as it lived :) - Happy weekend, Deb :) - hugs

David Crandall

Date: 11/11/2024 2:35:00 PM

Aw, poor rose! At least she had her day in the sun.

Deb M
Date: 11/11/2024 3:41:00 PM

Yes she did David….naked and exposed Ha! Thanks….Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/9/2024 6:51:00 PM

I smile. There is a little humor here. It is a clever poem.

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 7:42:00 PM

Hi Hilda....yes there is humour ....l am glad you got that Hilda....thankyou my friend! Debx

Emilia James

Date: 11/8/2024 11:54:00 AM

Roses were my Dads favourite flower, now I know why ; ) but my Mum was always his beautiful pink rose. Whenever I read a poem about roses it always takes me straight back to him in his garden. Emilia : )

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:28:00 PM

Hi Emilia….l love your comment so much….especially your dad calling your mum his pink Rose…..that is just so beautiful and it touched my heart! I hope this poem didn’t make you sad…..thankyou my sweet friend! Soupmail!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2024 1:13:00 AM

It's rare to see a pink rose. Pity the storm cannot let it survive. Cuddles.

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:47:00 PM

I know Victor but change with everything is inevitable…..shame though!! Cuddles….Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 11/7/2024 4:25:00 PM

‘Ere Deb…. Got any pictures ;-) enjoyed your evocative write, I just hope I won’t need a cold shower every time I garden.

Deb M
Date: 11/7/2024 4:58:00 PM

You make me laugh so much my FF with your cheekiness!! Deb x

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/7/2024 3:43:00 PM

The sad derobing of a beautiful pink rose, a lovely poem Deb… Beryl

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:49:00 PM

Thanks Beryl…always lovely to see you! Debx

John Read

Date: 11/7/2024 11:11:00 AM

Hi Deb, that is so sad a once a beautiful flower is no more.

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:48:00 PM

Hey John yes but she will be beautiful again! Cheers…Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/7/2024 10:55:00 AM

Hello Deb M., the wind destroys many flowers when it is strong. yet the flower always grow back. Hugs. /Darlene/x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2024 10:37:00 AM

Hello Deb M. Yes the flower always come back. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/ x

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:47:00 PM

Yes they do Darlene thank goodness! Thankyou….Debx

Jay Narain

Date: 11/7/2024 9:23:00 AM

Nothing lasts for ever. Nice poem.

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Jay….Debx

Michael Tor

Date: 11/7/2024 6:47:00 AM

Ohh so sad Deb. Her beauty was stripped away. My wifes favorite color is pink and she has roses in the yard but they are red in color. They are beautiful and fragrant. They are uplifting to look at and to smell. Enjoyed this one Deb shared with my wife Judy.

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:45:00 PM

Thankyou for sharing the poem with your wife Judy, Michael….l hope she liked it….Thanks my friend! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2024 5:55:00 AM

Beautiful flowers they are too Deb, a shame the storm came destroying her. Tom

Deb M
Date: 11/9/2024 3:43:00 PM

Thats nature for you Tom haha! Thanks…Debx