Rose

A bright red rose, sitting on my green grassy field
Swishing and swirling, tumbling twirling, 
But so its image is precise like day like night 
As so the wind smashes against my rose as 
Though washing it away like a clean sheet of paper and as
Stars light up above so its streaking its light toward my beckoning rose
And so my bright red rose safe from the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 8:18 PM
interesting poem, beautiful rose. Welcome to soup, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:26 PM
Interesting writing. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 7:20 AM
I so enjoyed your wonderful poem this morning Julia. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Julia, i just love poems about roses, delightful read, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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July 31, 2009 at 2:44 AM
Love this poetry here about the rose.. enjoyed the title as well. Remember the secret to recieving others comments yourself would be to comment on others. Welcome to the soup and I look forward to reading more of you. Enjoy your day. :)
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