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Rose

A bright red rose, sitting on my green grassy field Swishing and swirling, tumbling twirling, But so its image is precise like day like night As so the wind smashes against my rose as Though washing it away like a clean sheet of paper and as Stars light up above so its streaking its light toward my beckoning rose And so my bright red rose safe from the wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 8:18:00 PM
interesting poem, beautiful rose. Welcome to soup, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2009 4:26:00 PM
Interesting writing. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 7:20:00 AM
I so enjoyed your wonderful poem this morning Julia. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2009 6:52:00 AM
Julia, i just love poems about roses, delightful read, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/31/2009 2:44:00 AM
Love this poetry here about the rose.. enjoyed the title as well. Remember the secret to recieving others comments yourself would be to comment on others. Welcome to the soup and I look forward to reading more of you. Enjoy your day. :)
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