Yoni Dvorkis Poet Shape

Rorschach

.         any                  way
       youwant          toseethem
    theblotches        inthispicture
                  represent

                      you
                     they
                   canonly
                  symbolize
      
  thoughts       that       were
  alreadyin       your       mindall
youcandois      try         tomakesense
ofthemand       piece      thisbroken
    puzzle         back       together

                     hardly
                     aneasy
                     task



http://www.rorschach.org/ -the inkblot to the left of the title banner was my 'inspiration'. I 
was hoping to pull off something roughly in the same ball park.

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Daver Austin December 22, 2009 at 9:45 AM Great idea, Yoni. Ink blots scare me to death. At my age, I see the damndest things, all probably demented. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Corinne Curcio December 21, 2009 at 9:59 AM Well done - and best of luck in the contest. Congrats on your first round win

P Sheart December 21, 2009 at 8:37 AM Very clever Yoni, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser December 20, 2009 at 9:53 AM Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Yoni >> James

Raul Moreno November 30, 2009 at 10:00 PM Yoni, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2009 at 1:06 PM Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Yoni. Love,Carol

James Fraser November 30, 2009 at 10:38 AM Many congratulations Yoni on your win in Deborah's contest >> James

Donna Golden November 29, 2009 at 5:46 PM Wonderfully creative shape, Yoni! Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

Donna Golden August 26, 2009 at 11:07 PM Brilliant shape, Yoni! Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi August 26, 2009 at 6:17 PM wowser..GREAT..concrete verse...I say shamrock!!!! 4 leaf clover!!! tatatadaaaaaaaaaaaah! Light & Love brainiac

Lucinda Bulger August 20, 2009 at 8:49 AM OM Gosh!!!! This is terrefic!!!!! Always impressed with your work... ALWAYS. Your friend w/ love, Lucinda

John Freeman August 17, 2009 at 10:12 PM Hi Yoni, my mind seems to be blank. The only possible image I can even slightly come up with is, maybe the bottom of a type of a vehicle, like a buggy or something of that nature. And even that takes a lot of imagination. Sincerely Moses

Karla Null August 17, 2009 at 8:59 PM Very nice piece of work....Karla

John Loving Iii August 17, 2009 at 3:06 PM rorschach made most of the movie. i felt for him but in the end..... nicely done, imaginative. John H Loving III

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2009 at 2:37 PM I found so many images in this that I probably failed the test, Yoni. For some reason, I keep seeing a dragonfly and a pyramid. Really don't know what this means. Never took a rorschach test. The Christmas Cactus is the name of a specific flower. It is a cactus that has beautiful blooms that suddenly appear around Christmas. Very popular indoor plant. Love, Carolyn

Denis Joe August 17, 2009 at 12:01 PM Brilliant Yoni. I found the whole hoo-hah hilarious but this is one hell of a response. The narrative (which is skillfully done) reminds me of Zukofsky, but the work as a whole is definately you and shows a great talent as well as a dedicated poet.

August 17, 2009 at 10:48 AM Love the artistic format of this poem. It must have been quite a challenge to put it all together for our reading pleasure. Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it and for taking time to comment in my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown August 17, 2009 at 8:03 AM Good morning Yoni. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick August 17, 2009 at 1:14 AM Interesting concept. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop August 16, 2009 at 11:40 PM anyway you want to see them the blothches in this picture represent you, they can only symbolize thoughts that were already in your mind, all you can do is try to amke sense of them and piece this broken puzzle back together hardly an easy task--i did i just did the puzzle and its excellent,so creative Yoni and always with a message every broken puzzle in life can be fixed,like any problem-to my favs--amazing-charma