Rorschach

. any way youwant toseethem theblotches inthispicture represent you they canonly symbolize thoughts that were alreadyin your mindall youcandois try tomakesense ofthemand piece thisbroken puzzle back together hardly aneasy task http://www.rorschach.org/ -the inkblot to the left of the title banner was my 'inspiration'. I was hoping to pull off something roughly in the same ball park.

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/22/2009 9:45:00 AM

Great idea, Yoni. Ink blots scare me to death. At my age, I see the damndest things, all probably demented. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Corinne Curcio

Date: 12/21/2009 9:59:00 AM

Well done - and best of luck in the contest. Congrats on your first round win

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 8:37:00 AM

Very clever Yoni, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 9:53:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Yoni >> James

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 10:00:00 PM

Yoni, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2009 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Yoni. Love,Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2009 10:38:00 AM

Many congratulations Yoni on your win in Deborah's contest >> James

Donna Golden

Date: 11/29/2009 5:46:00 PM

Wonderfully creative shape, Yoni! Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

Donna Golden

Date: 8/26/2009 11:07:00 PM

Brilliant shape, Yoni! Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM

wowser..GREAT..concrete verse...I say shamrock!!!! 4 leaf clover!!! tatatadaaaaaaaaaaaah! Light & Love brainiac

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 8/20/2009 8:49:00 AM

OM Gosh!!!! This is terrefic!!!!! Always impressed with your work... ALWAYS. Your friend w/ love, Lucinda

John Freeman

Date: 8/17/2009 10:12:00 PM

Hi Yoni, my mind seems to be blank. The only possible image I can even slightly come up with is, maybe the bottom of a type of a vehicle, like a buggy or something of that nature. And even that takes a lot of imagination. Sincerely Moses

Karla Null

Date: 8/17/2009 8:59:00 PM

Very nice piece of work....Karla

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/17/2009 3:06:00 PM

rorschach made most of the movie. i felt for him but in the end..... nicely done, imaginative. John H Loving III

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2009 2:37:00 PM

I found so many images in this that I probably failed the test, Yoni. For some reason, I keep seeing a dragonfly and a pyramid. Really don't know what this means. Never took a rorschach test. The Christmas Cactus is the name of a specific flower. It is a cactus that has beautiful blooms that suddenly appear around Christmas. Very popular indoor plant. Love, Carolyn

Denis Joe

Date: 8/17/2009 12:01:00 PM

Brilliant Yoni. I found the whole hoo-hah hilarious but this is one hell of a response. The narrative (which is skillfully done) reminds me of Zukofsky, but the work as a whole is definately you and shows a great talent as well as a dedicated poet.

Date: 8/17/2009 10:48:00 AM

Love the artistic format of this poem. It must have been quite a challenge to put it all together for our reading pleasure. Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it and for taking time to comment in my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2009 8:03:00 AM

Good morning Yoni. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2009 1:14:00 AM

Interesting concept. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/16/2009 11:40:00 PM

anyway you want to see them the blothches in this picture represent you, they can only symbolize thoughts that were already in your mind, all you can do is try to amke sense of them and piece this broken puzzle back together hardly an easy task--i did i just did the puzzle and its excellent,so creative Yoni and always with a message every broken puzzle in life can be fixed,like any problem-to my favs--amazing-charma