Roots

She enters carefully
A journey that began so long ago
Culminating on this threshold of discovery 
With the turning of the knob, an old door, of peeling paint and squeaking hinge
The house, a derelict with broken shutters
Darkness, mold and gloom,...yet a pleasantness...a sense of familiarity
Floors that creak and groan
Surveying each room...gathering thoughts, sensations, emotions
Digesting the essence of stories told
Of sitting on a grandfather's knee, and hearing of this legacy
So long harbored, like faded photographs, in her heart

A glance outside the bay window
Pushing aside the cobweb laced shade
Rubbing dirt and grime from the glass, and viewing a river in the distance
A pasture overgrown with weeds
Gopher hills the only things sprouting in the yard
Flower beds empty, except for tendrils of devil grass..
Forsaken, abandoned it is today,...but she can picture it then...
She can see the geraniums in bloom as if it were yesterday

She walks the hallowed rooms imagining the family
The father coming in from the fields
Covered with the red soil that he cherished
The mother, apron clad, gathering her children
Yes....it is over there where they would sit...
Around the table, the Bible resting on the shelf
Waiting to be read by evening light

Just as the giant oak in the yard
That shouts and tussels with the wind
With deep roots which cling so intimate with the rock below
In this journey, she clings... 
To things that are deeply rooted
Family, love, life, death, that which is...that which has been..
No longer are there only sepia colored stories
Stored in a shoe box on a closet shelf...
This is a journey that continues on and on...
And like the oak...it reaches deeply...searching for constancy
These are her roots...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mason Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 10:02 AM
What a winner!! You are such an awesome writer, Carrie ... its scary ... LOL ...
White Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 9:35 PM
A lot of fond memories in that house, thanks for sharing
Villarosa Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 1:33 AM
The good old days still haunting us when we come in contact to places holding special memories. Enjoyed the reading this morning, and good luck to you for this contest, Carrie. (^_^) Noel.
Shango Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 4:01 PM
I read this poem almost with reverence. This scenes were so familiar, the memory so poignant ... and telling, O the telling was excellent, my friend. One love and all the best in the contest.
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:26 AM
This is an incredible piece, Carrie! The journey in your life seems to be filled with strong roots. You have an admirable perpective and I wish you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Mckenzie Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Carrie~ What a beautiful story you told yes roots to carry on don't they. I love this piece best wishes in the contest! And thank you for your on going support here on the soup. Love Laura :)
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Absolutely breathtaking memories. Wishing you the best in the contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Perfect, Carrie! This should be the start of a short story!!! Sometimes it is sad to see what happened to our still vivid past! It is so good that we still got memories even if only in sepia...Thank you for sharing this wis us and thank you for your comments...Really enjoyed redaing this!...Love, Gert
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 4:03 AM
The journey back in memories...Great idea and topic that should be in the winner's circle ..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 1:51 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 1:03 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.Enjoy your grandchild company,they take years from you until they leave.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 8:59 PM
As always, a very great descriptive write, and I'm sure will do well in the contest. LUv, Andrea ps there is one other people other than Bree who loves housecleaning . MY MOM, that's why I hate it so much.
Dillard Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 6:55 PM
A touching journey of the mind's eye, bound to the heart. RAY
Ryerson Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 6:42 PM
My-oh-my, Carrie...These are your roots!... Great nostolgic piece of work indeed...I have many of the same memories of my grand-parents' house where I used to spend summers as a young lad...I can still remember every square inch of that place! - Tim
James Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 4:59 PM
good luck Carrie, but with this piece i don't think you'll need it. Wonderful!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 4:41 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Carrie and good luck in Matt's contest.. a winner for sure..luv.. Linda-Marie
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