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Roots

I water my plants With my watering cup And the soil becomes wet As the roots drink it up. The leaves, once a‘wilt On their stems stand up straight And I’m glad that their drink Didn’t reach them too late. Just like plants, we have roots Which, when starved, make us droop And at times, we’ll perk up With some chicken-type soup. But for humans, some kindness Can have that effect, Though it isn’t the cure We should always expect.

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Date: 12/30/2023 7:20:00 PM
I enjoyed how you tied this concept all together. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/27/2023 11:43:00 AM
Enjoyed
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Date: 12/25/2023 7:11:00 PM
For my roots, I go to midnight confession. How about you? Share a root beer with Father Fosdick or Priestly Paul --- and then let him tell you how many times he cheated on his secret gay lover. Yes, indeed. Sign of the times alright...
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Date: 12/25/2023 5:21:00 PM
I don’t know how you do it, Ilene. You speak in truths that would take me twenty stanzas to simulate
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Date: 12/25/2023 4:08:00 PM
You are great at finding the truth. Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/25/2023 12:38:00 PM
"But for humans, some kindness Can have that effect, Though it isn’t the cure" An act of Kindness goes a long way. it would be a start. Thank You for Sharing :) Ed
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